writing-prose

Writing Prose

Apply plain language and Simplified Technical English (ASD-STE100) to documentation. Read references/style-guide.md first. It carries the word table, examples, score command, and review criteria.

One busy reader

Kenneth Roman and Joel Raphaelson wrote Writing That Works for memos and proposals. A PR description is the same job: one busy reader, one decision, no time. Lead with the recommendation, name the action you want, and cut every sentence that describes the document. The style guide carries the rest.

Plain language

• Write at a seventh-grade reading level with common words.
• Define each acronym, domain term, or jargon term at first use.
• One idea per sentence. Prefer one plain verb to a nominalization.
• Use American spelling and one consistent name for each thing.

Two modes

Choose per sentence:

• Strict: instructions, numbered steps, warnings, errors, and runbook commands. Cap at 20 words. Use imperative form, one instruction per sentence, and condition before command. Ban would, could, and might.
• STE-flavored: design documents, ADRs, PRDs, changelogs, commit bodies, and review comments. Cap at 25 words. Declarative prose is allowed. Use would or could only for an actual alternative or consequence. Ban might.

A consuming skill's format contract wins. These modes govern sentence prose.

Mechanical invariants

• Use simple tenses and active voice unless the actor is unknown, irrelevant, or deliberately omitted.
• Keep noun clusters to three words. Do not omit subjects, verbs, or articles.
• Use lists for complex text. Never use semicolons. Keep paragraphs to six sentences and one topic.
• Put warnings and cautions before the protected step.
• Name concrete files, commands, paths, identifiers, and components.
• Use the substitutions, restricted meanings, and exceptions in the style guide.

Words and phrases to delete

Delete marketing adjectives, modal prefaces, filler, and false-ease words such as simply, just, of course, and obviously. Preserve them only in verbatim quotes, code or proper nouns, or established technical terms whose meaning would change. State measurable properties instead of evaluative adjectives.